came across the term 'acrostic poetry'----and heres an attempt.hope you will like it
the sentence is ---I sat on the edge of cliff wishing to die---the froggy part is just a dash of humourand not acrostic
too much of love and romance have come out from my key board----hence this change
too much of love and romance have come out from my key board----hence this change
acrostic
I sat on the edge of cliff
sorry at my plight.
Ah! !why hadn't I seen
That wicked gleam in her eye?
Oh! no lover can ever bear this
Neither so could I.
Emanating
Deceit and
Garish ideas -were, from those large lotus
Eyes.
Only she could tell why and
For what had she betrayed,
Cheated on my
Love--which
I had thought would bring with it more love in an array.
Faith mine was killed by
Fate, which had me thus betrayed.
When that day she walked away
Ignoring both my arms
Stretched wide to engulf .
Her eyes swept past; and my hands
In an instant were rebuffed.
No more did she need them
Gone was the welcome smile.
Tense,and alone I watched her
On some other arm recline.
Demoralized life, brought me here with
Intentions to die
Ending my life as anonymous with no one to cry .
II
non acrostic
There was this frog ,so hungry,
wandering in search of food
the only thing he saw was
this man on the cliff about to swoon.
He prayed to God ,this frog
How can I eat that giant?
Please do something oh lord!!
and make him for my mouth more pliant.
GOD was that day in good humour
"as" all was well with the world.
He thought let me bless this
beast of prey--and HE his fingers twirled.
Lo and behold !GOD!!!!, changed , the slimmy froggy's head
His mouth was elongated, and big teeth grew instead
Some spikes too grew which made him look oh!! ever so more vile
That God in his humour !!!!called him a cute FROCODILE.
THE Man above was the prey
and the frog below
THE PRAYER
God that day had made up his mind
to oblige all his HEIRS
He fulfilled the lover's wish
to jump from the cliff and die
and thus provided food
for his favourite frocodile
pics from the net
I remember these. The first one is an awesome take. Tha second one is very cute :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Ghazala
Deletehad been missing you in the last few posts --but you have made my day again by visiting them all
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rajni