Friday, 5 April 2013

advantage eyes---in the corridors of life







Tears,
flow down
when sadness strikes.
Tears,
flow down
when the heart takes a flight.

Tears,
are always,
The language of the heart.
Tears ,
flow down
when we meet or depart.

Tears say so much
that words can ne'er convey.
just as the eyes
over the lips hold sway.!

Eyes do the same
as what do the lips
but its always"advantage eyes"
when a heartbeat is missed.

But  eyes only talk
And  tears only say
To them who are yours,
 who in your heart forever stay.

When feelings are needed
to convey or divulge,
the language of eyes
score more over words
those pearl like droplets
Ah! ever ! so easily assert.
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9 comments:

  1. indu chhibber5 April 2013 at 22:28

    A lot to be said for tears eh?
    But there is one problem--we can control our words but not our tears.I guess that is why they are the honest language of heart.

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    1. Rajni Sinha6 April 2013 at 04:29

      Very rightly said Indu ji

      Honest language of the heat ---indeed

      thanks a lot

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  2. Easwar Arumugam6 April 2013 at 03:11

    Yep, tears are the language of heart. Nice composition.

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    1. Rajni Sinha6 April 2013 at 04:29

      Thankyou

      Arumugam ji

      thanks for the appreciation

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  3. Vishal Rathod6 April 2013 at 05:55

    Awesome Compostion and nicely penned
    Travel India

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  4. Woman'n'Beyond6 April 2013 at 23:37

    Eyes definitely have en edge over the lips. They speak where words fail, they convince when words prove insufficient. Well written.

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  5. Tomichan Matheikal7 April 2013 at 05:02

    Tears make me uncomfortable. Even your poem did.

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  6. The Mukhtiars8 April 2013 at 02:30

    nice onee

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