Freedom cannot be bought
Its always won and fought.
Who bring it through bloodshed
Have many a tears to shed.
And families are left distraught.
We got freedom at midnight
And showed the world our might
Our might was non -violence
We pacified the tyrants.
And got what was our right.
But Freedom ,do not squander,
Give this a thought and ponder.
That Freedom to be deserved
Is precious and needs be preserved.
By HONESTY , INTEGRITY and VALOUR.
Valour,honesty and integrity
Stem when we take RESPONSIBILTY
to preserve and not destroy
the harvest of our toils.
For that is our Identity.
So Freedom is not a toy
Which we can repair and destroy
Its our Identity and Dignity
Lets shoulder the Responsibility
To live for it or Die.
The form is " Limerick "– with 5 line stanzas following the pattern of aabba (which denotes that each stanza is of five lines of which 1st, 2nd & 5th lines rhyme; and so do the 3rd & 4th )
Ah this limerick style-thanks for telling about it.
ReplyDeleteNice thoughts Rajni;only our leaders have forgotten all about it.
Lots of love.
Thankyou so much Indu ji ---actually I mentioned about the style because I thought the words and thoughts were rather childish -----it was just to try this style that I penned them
Deletethanks a lot for appreciating
HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY
Nice thought Rajni Ji and very well written!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jahid
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Liked your message, Rajni. And thanks for explaining how a limerick works - it made your poem more interesting.
ReplyDeletethanks Kay Em
ReplyDeleteso glad to see you here and so glad you liked it
Well versed!
ReplyDeleteThose are beautiful thoughts echoed in the limerick and thanks so much for refreshing my memories of a limerick, I remember reading and enjoying it long back.
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