pic from net we are together you and me and that is the whole world for me come rain or hail or sun your love is my safest canopy. to me your love is lease of life to me your love is the prettiest sight do 'I' need help when 'YOU' are there? your arms are the only crutch to rely. oh look at that distant glorious sight see that horizon that meets the eye . where the sky engulfs the earth i am the earth and you the sky When we are together you and me The world then smiles and so do we Under your caressing looks i breathed under your caring eyes i hope to die.. |
Friday, 19 October 2012
you and I
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Been there...done that, already:)
ReplyDeleteAn endearing piece, Rajni. Very well put :)
Thanks alot Panchali---long time :)
DeleteHI Rajni..
ReplyDeleteFirstly, Fantastically written..i liked it...
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Bhavik shah
Thanks Bhavikk---thanks for appreciating
DeleteSo sweet!
ReplyDeleteThankyou Amit ji ----thanks for appreciating
DeleteLoved it. The emotions pouring out of this piece - without any complex words to grapple with - touches the chord. Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks Indiawilds---so glad you liked it ---and thanks for that mention about simple words.I guess emotions don't need complex words to be expressed
Deletethanks a lot once again
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rajni
Just beautiful!I am living this phase & these words are very real.
ReplyDeleteThanks Indu ji
DeleteI am glad you found these words and emotions "real"
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rajni
Very sweet poem...<3
ReplyDeleteThanks alot Sri Valli
Deleteyou are welcome to my blogs please do keep visiting
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