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Friday, 22 February 2013

Diamante

                                                           laughter

Happy ,funny 

pleasing,soothing,teasing 

smile ,lips :,eyes ,tears 

saddening, flowing, trickling 

deep, sad 

sorrow 







Boys 

smart, handsome 

caring,demanding,flirting 

son,heir--:daughter heiress 

loving,soothing,belonging 

sweet,beautiful 

girls 





food 

delicious,edible 

fulfilling,nourishing,pacifying 

hunger,stomach.:thirst, lips 

torturing,agonizing,killing 

soothing, cooling 

water. 



sun 

hot,,bright 

destroying,burning,scorching 

fire, ,coal, :water, river 

cooling,flowing,enlivening 

soothing,nourishing 

rain 










trying my hand  at Diamante form of poetry that Contain opposing concepts which meet in the middle line, structured in a diamond shape
Noun
Adjective, Adjective
Verb, Verb, Verb
Noun, Noun, Noun, Noun
Verb, Verb, Verb
Adjective, Adjective

noun



14 comments:

  1. That's nice concept and nice way to portray...thoughts...!!!

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    1. Thanks Anjan

      thanks for appreciating
      regards
      rajni

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    1. Arumugam ji

      thanks a lot for appreciating
      regards
      rajni

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  3. Oh so wonderful a form, Rajni!
    And treated so beautifully too!!
    I feel like trying it out:D

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    1. Thankyou so much Amit ji

      feels great to receive such comments from you

      and feel elated that my composition could create so much interest in you

      please do let us have a gem from you

      regards
      rajni

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  4. Rajni, this is cha cha cha of words! Great composition.

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    1. Thanks Fayaz

      feels great to see people appreciating

      thanks alot once again
      regards
      rajni

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  5. This is new to me. And you seem to have beautifully executed it. Well done.

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  6. nice form of poetry nd a gud composition too :)

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    1. Thanks Saikat

      Just gave it a try and am happy at the appreciation its receiving.

      welcome to my blogspace
      please do keep visiting
      regards
      rajni

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  7. Thanks a lot Ramakant

    I came across this on google and thought of trying my hand --am so glad at the appreciation I am receiving.

    Thanks once again

    and please do keep visiting my blospace
    regards
    rajni

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  8. This is quite new to me. Good concept. And really creative.

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  9. Thanks JK

    thanks for appreciaitng
    regards
    rajni

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