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Friday, 19 October 2012

you and I




pic from net




we are together
you and me
and that is the whole
world for me
come rain or hail or sun
your love is my  safest canopy.


to me your love 
is lease of life
to me your love is the prettiest sight
do 'I' need  help when 'YOU' are there?
your arms are the only crutch 
to rely.

oh look at that distant glorious sight
see  that horizon that meets the eye .
where the sky engulfs the earth 
i am the earth and  you the sky 

When we are  together
 you and me
The world then smiles and so do we
Under your caressing looks
i breathed
under your caring eyes i hope to die..

12 comments:

  1. Been there...done that, already:)
    An endearing piece, Rajni. Very well put :)

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  2. HI Rajni..
    Firstly, Fantastically written..i liked it...
    Thanks for sharing..& thnks for visiting and commenting my on posts..
    Do visit agian
    Regards
    Bhavik shah

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    1. Thanks Bhavikk---thanks for appreciating

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    1. Thankyou Amit ji ----thanks for appreciating

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  4. Loved it. The emotions pouring out of this piece - without any complex words to grapple with - touches the chord. Very nice.

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    1. Thanks Indiawilds---so glad you liked it ---and thanks for that mention about simple words.I guess emotions don't need complex words to be expressed
      thanks a lot once again
      please do keep visiting
      regards
      rajni

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  5. Just beautiful!I am living this phase & these words are very real.

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    1. Thanks Indu ji

      I am glad you found these words and emotions "real"
      Please do keep visiting my blogs
      warm regards
      rajni

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    1. Thanks alot Sri Valli

      you are welcome to my blogs please do keep visiting
      regards
      rajni

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